The Christmas is one of most important festivity around the world. We can found the origins of Christmas in the annual commemoration of the birth of Jesus Christ. Although it is a Christian celebration, his power crosses the five continents and, in several countries, to generate big celebrations surrounded by gifts, games and memories.
Every year, I celebrate Christmas with my parents, with a delicious dinner, while waiting for midnight to open the gifts. I like Christmas, because is a moment full of hope and joy, specially, to children. However, this commemoration has changed dramatically from his establishment, because it has become a commercial celebration, leaving very little to religion or, in my opinion, his true sense: to share.
Good job, Sebastán.
ResponderEliminarSome important issues:
After "can" or any other modal verb,(e.g. must, should, will) you use the base form of the verb. So, say, "we can FIND".
Also, use a subject after a conector:
"because IT is a moment full of hope and joy".
Also say, "this commemoration has changed dramatically (from his) SINCE IT WAS FIRST ESTABLISHED"
Finally, the possessive for things is "its" so, "its true sense".
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