sábado, 21 de enero de 2012

This is...my music!


When I think about music, I travel through a world of sensations and stories, a world that call me to reflect about the life and everything that around me. The music is a way to relax me or active me. The music leads me from happiness to rage, although this seems strange.

I enjoy to my favourite bands while I study, when I traveling to somewhere or in my free time. I enjoy listening to the music of Andrés Calamaro and The Doors, which are my favourite artists. In general, I like rock music, although, in special, I like Classic Rock and Rock Nacional of Argentina that which I follow since a few years ago. Unfortunately, I still can’t to assist to a concert that someone these artists, but I hope to have the opportunity that this situation changes in some moment of my life.

In my opinion, the music sharing should accept, because it allows that anyone can to access to the music of his favourite artist, without that the lack of money prevent him: the piracy may be a crime, but everyone who has internet access can download your favourite music is one of the best ways to access the culture to our time.

Finally, I think that a world without music could not exist, we would fall in deepest darkness and we could not to express our emotions or our dreams.

1 comentario:

  1. Good job Seba.

    Some comments:

    Say: " I enjoy LISTENING to my favourite bands while I study, AND when I AM traveling somewhere or in my free time..."

    Also, never say "that which". Use one or the other, but not both.

    "...I like Classic Rock and Rock Nacional of Argentina (that) which I follow FOR a few years (ago).

    Additionally, after "CAN" or "COULD" YOU NEVER USE "TO". Remember also to make sentences shorter and straight to the point:

    "I still can’t (to) assist to a concert OF ANY OF these artists, but I hope to have the opportunity TO DO IT AT some POINT of my life".


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